Good music. The new broadcast is a bit strange it is not until this bit is over that i feel like it is an opening sequence to a film. apart from this ithink it works very well.
After the news it feels like a film, but this is probably just because there are no productions slides or backing music which then appears. And theres a zoom shot I wasn't too sure about.
I think one zoom ends on a still and the other two don't so you need to make them all the same but i think this is a really good way to get some credits in. I know what they mean about it not feeling like a film until the end but i like that as it makes you wonder what's happening in the news section. Is it a bit short at the moment? Seems a funny place to end.
I liked the news although the sound was a bit odd because it looked like the weather was bad. You do need a transition between the news and the next bit I think. I like it though, I want to know what happened. I like the place for the titles and credits too but agree the zooms need to be even.
It lokks good so far and it's different which is good as a lot of people do horror and this looks really good. Is there a time differnence between the two parts?
It looks good and seems like a news report but I thought the BBC logo was red? The rain is quite loud. Good idea though and I like how the music changes the mood.
Like the style and idea. Ends in a funny place though. Agree the credits font isnt right. News report is good, shame about the weather but you can fix the sound.
Its a different kind of opening which is good. Like it so far!Also want to know what happened to the girl. Assuming the boy listening to the news is her brother? Did he kill her?
I dont think he killed her, he's sad. It says she dies of an overdose? Like everyone said, the sound needs work and a lot of rerecording but its good! Agree there needs to be conversation at the end and i think you have time left in your 2 mins.
I agree the first wall zoom is different to the others because it doesn't end on a still but it's a good idea to use the space for credits. Does the time change? If it does maybe you need an intertitle to say so?
Good music.
ReplyDeleteThe new broadcast is a bit strange it is not until this bit is over that i feel like it is an opening sequence to a film. apart from this ithink it works very well.
James
After the news it feels like a film, but this is probably just because there are no productions slides or backing music which then appears. And theres a zoom shot I wasn't too sure about.
ReplyDeleteI think one zoom ends on a still and the other two don't so you need to make them all the same but i think this is a really good way to get some credits in. I know what they mean about it not feeling like a film until the end but i like that as it makes you wonder what's happening in the news section. Is it a bit short at the moment? Seems a funny place to end.
ReplyDeleteSteph
I liked the news although the sound was a bit odd because it looked like the weather was bad. You do need a transition between the news and the next bit I think. I like it though, I want to know what happened. I like the place for the titles and credits too but agree the zooms need to be even.
ReplyDeleteErin
It lokks good so far and it's different which is good as a lot of people do horror and this looks really good. Is there a time differnence between the two parts?
ReplyDeleteJess
I like that it's different although i agree there are lots of sound problems. John
ReplyDeleteIt looks good and seems like a news report but I thought the BBC logo was red? The rain is quite loud. Good idea though and I like how the music changes the mood.
ReplyDeleteHollie
Well done! It seems a bit short, are you filming / editing more? Do the boy and girl at the end talk? But good so far.
ReplyDeleteSarah
Its different which is good and sad. I like it. What everyone said about the rain / wind is true, can you make them re-record the voice?
ReplyDeleteRobert
I like it and the first boy looks really sad! Well done! I'm interested to see what happens next and how she got in a mess.
ReplyDeleteRachel
Its really good although the same as everyone said about the sound and being short, but i think you're filming / editing more?
ReplyDeleteMikey
Like where you are having the credits, probably not that font though? Something quite blocky to go with your music? harry
ReplyDeleteLike the style and idea. Ends in a funny place though. Agree the credits font isnt right. News report is good, shame about the weather but you can fix the sound.
ReplyDeleteJonas
Its a different kind of opening which is good. Like it so far!Also want to know what happened to the girl. Assuming the boy listening to the news is her brother? Did he kill her?
ReplyDeleteCaitlin
I wanted to know that too! Gemma
ReplyDeleteI dont think he killed her, he's sad. It says she dies of an overdose? Like everyone said, the sound needs work and a lot of rerecording but its good! Agree there needs to be conversation at the end and i think you have time left in your 2 mins.
ReplyDeleteFarrell
I agree the first wall zoom is different to the others because it doesn't end on a still but it's a good idea to use the space for credits. Does the time change? If it does maybe you need an intertitle to say so?
ReplyDeleteTina
I agree with the intertitle, it will help make things clear.
ReplyDeleteIts good, especially the music at the end, but the sound is bad for the outside broadcast.
ReplyDeleteLiam
Music is good, i like it. Changes the mood well.
ReplyDeleteJake
Like the music too. Sound is difficult in rain and needs to change for when boy is listening like it comes through the TV.
ReplyDeleteHarriet
Its good and makes me want to know what happens.
ReplyDeleteBilly
Everyome said the sound and too short but i like what youve done so far.
ReplyDeleteShannon